
Sherry Cooper   Multitudes   2005The remaining four finalists for the 2011
storySouth Million Writers Award (the shortlist of ten is
here), plus one other.
Voting is open through 6 July, with the winner presumably announced shortly thereafter.
Nicola Mason, 'Cancer Party'  (
BLACKBIRD, FALL 2010)
A guy in his thirties has cancer and is near the end, and he invites a group of doctors round to keep him company in his last days. This was not as uplifting a read as I was expecting because I actually felt it could have been better with
fewer emotional ups and downs and more understatement. As it is it's a rollercoaster that reads like a TV soap script, something that packs too much drama into too short a space with little room left for characterisation. By the end I felt lousy because I realised I hadn't really much cared for this guy dying of cancer, so wondered if I'd missed something. A re-read confirmed otherwise. Shame on me.
Hannu Rajaniemi, 'Elegy for a Young Elk'  (
SUBTERRANEAN PRESS, SPRING 2010)
A poet living in the woods with a talking bear is visited by an avatar of his ex-wife, who asks him to go on a small quest to a post-human, future city. This story is clean and bright and fresh, and (paraphrasing Clarke) sufficiently advanced science fiction that it's indistinguishable from fantasy (but no, it ain't fantasy). Rajaniemi's Disneyesque playground and the dizzying rides he puts you on here are seamed together by the nano-stuff in the air, the virtual, the quantum glue that lies hidden where the joins meet. This was a re-read, and I've come to like this story despite Rajaniemi's tendency to leave you behind, and it does display a little more of the heart that I felt was missing from
The Quantum Thief.
Amber Sparks, 'Most of Them Would Follow Wandering Fires'  (
BARRELHOUSE, 14 DECEMBER 2010)
A prose piece that embeds fantasy and myth in the everyday. I've seen this kind of thing done before (but couldn't tell you exactly where) although the bonus here is the diversity of allegories, and there's a poetry to how they all seem to sequence each other. However it's also difficult to know where everything begins and ends or if in fact it could be better understood with the brief chapters in reverse order, as may be implied. I didn't mind it all, but I was left feeling a bit underwhelmed by its scattergun approach to impressing the reader.
Kyle Winkler, 'Teratology'  (
CONJUNCTIONS, 28 JUNE 2010)
Not actually a finalist, as I found this small gem filed under
Other Stories Worth Noting (ie. nominated stuff that didn't meet the eligibility requirements). It's told as an interview with a near-future Chicago scientist who researched the strange case of a girl who can cause genetic mutations in others, while being ostracised by the scientific community himself. It's the right length (as interviews go) and Winkler packs quite a bit of worldbuilding into the format, but if he ever expands on the idea to fill a novella or novel I'd certainly like to read that too.
Favourite short story of the week: Viet Thanh Nguyen, 'Arthur Arellano'  (NARRATIVE MAGAZINE, SPRING 2010)
Arthur, a bankrupt and hapless Californian of Latin descent, has received a new lease of life from a liver transplant but finds himself indebted to the wrong guy. The dialogue is spot on, the situation very believable while being economically described and the characterisation excellent; I felt engaged with all of the small cast of characters as well as the story itself from start to finish, and you can't reasonably ask for more than that. This get's my #1 vote. (Narrative requires a free subscription to read their stories.)